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What Does Modern Science Bring us?
  1)科学究竟带给我们什么?这个问题一直备受争议;
  2)很多人认为科学带来了很多问题,比如污染、核武器;
  3)你对此的看法是…
应包含作文地带提供如下内容:指出关于科学的争议,简单阐述科学带来的问题;表明“我”对科学的正面看法,阐述科学带给我们的好处;得出结论:科学发展利大于弊。
What Does Modern Science Bring us?
The question “What does modern science bring us?” has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes.
  [3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]What’s more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work.
  [3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full advantage of it.
  佳句临摹
  1.佳句:Compared with the negative aspects, I think, the blessing of science is more evident.
  临摹:我认为,与传统的字典相比,电子字典携带和使用起来更加方便。Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use.
  2.佳句:Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development.
  临摹:了解一个人,我们可以看他交什么样的朋友,也可以看他读什么样的书。A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps.
3.佳句:It is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results.
  临摹:一个人的成功不是取决于他的外貌而是取决于他的能力。It is not one’s appearance but his capability that decides his final success.

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